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The Story of Winter

by *Auriethepixie

"I have to give you something," he said lightly, looking up at the expanse of sky stretched as far as the eye could see.  "That's the way these things go.  A deal is a deal."

"Right," I replied distractedly, wondering what he was gazing at.

"How about winter?  I'll give you winter."  

The night was cloudless.  Inviting.  I think I would live in the stars, if I could.
I glanced at him, studying his profile.  I wasn't sure if he was mocking me or if he actually meant anything he said.  I would never find out.  I would die not knowing.

"Winter?" I asked, hoping that for just a moment he would look at me.  "You can't just...give me a season.  That's not possible."

He laughed.  I loved it when he laughed.  His cheeks dimpled; it took away his intensity and for one joyous moment, he appeared less burdened.  Then his smile faded and he said softly, "Sure I can.  I can give you anything you desire.  Any season you wish.  But I think winter fits best."

"Because I'm a frigid bitch?"  I was joking.  I wanted to see him laugh one more time before everything ended.

Finally, he looked down at me.  Bottomless, steel grey eyes met mine and I lost everything I was thinking.  Jaded thoughts and doubts and worries fled.  I felt weightless, liberated.  When he touched my cheek, his hand was warm.  When he kissed me, it was achingly soft.  He whispered against my lips, "There's beauty in it.  Crystalline snow, silver skies…despite it, everything seems more overwhelming.  The cold, the death, the lack of light.   But you know what?"

"What?" I breathed.

"They always appreciate you more when you're gone."
:iconauriethepixie:
It's a Nothing. Sometimes I write just to write. Since I'm working on my NaNoWriMo novel, I wanted to do something other than my book for a little while.

May I just say: yes, I am heartstruck. I am a well-loved woman, so I can't help but write just a little bit of romance, even if I tend to affix myself to writing the bittersweet stuff. :aww:

So here is something ambiguous and not to be taken very seriously. It is what it is.

love 5 5 joy 5 5 wow 5 5 mad 0 0 sad 2 2 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconblackbunty:
Very good, it flows extremely well.

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I didn't sell my soul to Satan to protect my life but to keep him safe, that is a deal I can never regret.

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs. - William Shakespeare.
Nerd? We prefer the term: Intellectual Badass.
:iconmippy5678:
Well done! =D
:iconsmuttlover:
-wrysmile-
Sometimes, the bittersweet tastes almost better than the sweetest, because it's a contrast, and makes you appreciate the candies so much more.

Like DarkChocolateRaspberry. <3

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i want to go take pictures in the rain.
i want to sit on the beach during a storm.
i want to watch the lightening flash crackle across blackened skies.
i want to see the world illuminated.

i want to experience.
:icondr7key:
That is wonderful indeed! powerful words!

p.s: i liked the Excerpt of your novel; i felt intense bitterness that i couldn't find the rest to read. I wish to read the rest as soon as possible. Very solid writing that you have! i can't wait to read it :D

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Supremacy Is By Doing Better!
:iconauriethepixie:
Thank you! You may read the current story I am working on here: [link] :)
:icondr7key:
You are welcome, i've the pleasure to have known such a talented artist as yourself; wonderful indeed! i'll start reading it right away ;)

merci

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Supremacy Is By Doing Better!
:iconsuicidalmarshmallow:
Made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside....kinda like I wish there was more >.>
Anyways, stumbled upon one of your pictures and started going through your gallery. I like them a lot! The intensity it great! :nod: And this writing is the most beautiful I've read in a long, long time :)
Made a big part of my day :heart:

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"The time you enjoyed wasting is not wasted time." -- Bertrand Russell.
:iconauriethepixie:
Thank you! If you're ever interested in more writing, I have a webseries! [link]
:iconsuicidalmarshmallow:
Ooooh! Thank you! I'll be sure to check it out :nod:

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"The time you enjoyed wasting is not wasted time." -- Bertrand Russell.
:iconabsynthememoir:
"How about winter? I'll give you winter."
Hopeless Romantic :aww:
Your imagination gives me chicken skin.

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Excessive chocolate brings serious amounts of happiness